Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Wonder Flower Comments

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Hooding snakes
Covering Lord Shiva
Crouching over petals
Pale rose in color
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Vijay Sai R
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Kanniappan Kanniappan 30 June 2013

What is the name of this flower in Tamil?

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Okoronkwo Jackson Jonathan 11 January 2013

Short but fattened with meaning. the manifestor of all things pure and natural.

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Stream Nightingale 28 December 2012

umm ok well...........................................

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Ilaria Boffa 28 December 2012

the destroyer, the pure, the transformer... snake, flowers, mystifying appearance... great images!

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Riffat Samad 04 December 2012

Wonderful example of `imagism', representing William Carlos Williams' theory -“No ideas but in things.”

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could not find the picture regretfuly but the poem made it sound quite buetifal and dangerous.

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regretfuly I could not look up the picture but I was intrigued on the image played in my mind.

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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 03 December 2012

liked it......well written..........

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Douglas Scotney 03 December 2012

I have seen pictures of, and read about the nagalinga flower. It attracts snakes for its beautiful smell and drops cannonball fruits. Do not rest against such a tree-the fruits grow on the trunk. Be careful in the presence of beauty. Don't fill your basket with just one beauty.

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Kelvin Owusu 03 December 2012

great poem short sweet unable to look at the link but a nice descriptions thanks for sharing

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Cierrah Smiles 01 December 2012

Short and sweet i like it

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Babatunde Aremu 10 November 2012

Very imaginative and natural. I like it

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Danny Aran 02 November 2012

It's a good poem, I can imagine everything.

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The mystic element has a great intimidating force as well. It is fine work of the kind though short. But I call a spade a spade here... I wonder how the poets from beyond the Atlantic can enjoy and comment on these lines.. It is nothing but hypocrisy of the gentle readers... You may invite the English speaking friends when the themes have a universal appeal. Keep writing.

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Stevie Taite 02 November 2012

Ah with the stamen sticking out, like they are being fired, guarding the hindu Deity? I took the time to search the images. wonderful to connect something so beautiful with your Holy lord. Very captivating

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Captain Cur 06 May 2012

Very inspirational indeed. I could smell the haunting fragrance and see the imagery.

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Madhavi Grace 21 April 2012

short but a beautiful poem!

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Nontobeko Dlamini 05 April 2012

simple yet beautiful. Love flowers, thank you for the invitation.

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Vikas Tripathi 05 April 2012

Wonderful write, Sir!

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Joub Kahuria 04 April 2012

Wonderful piece simple and yet capturing. keep up the good work.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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