Sunday, July 8, 2012

Wonder Comments

Rating: 3.8

eyes shut tight, hands clenched in anticipation,
the little girl to wish her hearts desire is in preparation.

you see her small lips whispering pleading,
the wind carries her desires, knowing that her heart is needing.
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Maureen Adair
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Ellias Anderson Jr. 25 July 2012

the meaning behind the scene is perfect. and the master rhyming is so cool. nice work Kristina.

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Impressive write...Your employment of couplets works well here...Well Done! ~FjR~

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