Sunday, July 8, 2012
Wonder Comments
Rating: ★3.8
eyes shut tight, hands clenched in anticipation,
the little girl to wish her hearts desire is in preparation.
you see her small lips whispering pleading,
the wind carries her desires, knowing that her heart is needing.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
08 July 2012
Impressive write...Your employment of couplets works well here...Well Done! ~FjR~
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7/25/2025 6:03:33 PM # 1.0.0
the meaning behind the scene is perfect. and the master rhyming is so cool. nice work Kristina.