Tuesday, September 16, 2008

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If the world should lose its savour
And I cease to feel a thrill
At the lorikeet's bold beauty
Or the magpie's liquid trill...
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Frank Halliwell
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Tiffanie Lau 16 September 2008

agree with the others. beautiful imaginary =) thanks for sharing!

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Tanya Stanford 16 September 2008

Exactly as TJ said. You are brilliant! I have enjoyed every single piece of poetry you have posted here.

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Tj Becker 16 September 2008

The imagery was really great. You painted a great picture with your pen. I liked the emotion of respect and awe of nature. Great flow and rhyme. All around great poem

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Frank Halliwell

Frank Halliwell

Hamilton Canada
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