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you empathise as a child extremly well. Great poem Liz Munro.

Your title also hooked me. I would have loved to have more lines in the same voice.

could life ever be so simple as it was then? i'm trying to get back there... good stuff here, Vincent. Jake

Brilliant title Vincent, So wonderfully put together. A celebration of innocence that has rarely been bettered. All the best Denis Joe

Adorable poem, Vincent. Your inner child is wonderful. I so enjoyed. Warmest regards, CJ