Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Won The Loss! ! Comments

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I was weak, I was bleak,
I was dumb, I was sick,

I looked for a fight, I wanted to thrive,
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deepak chhapolia
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Wahab Abdul 11 January 2012

the agony in your heart of defeat which is taken in terms, , , that you have not been recognised or you want to do some thing which brings you a win, .....this is a very assertive and inspiring poem i like the....for its flow and glow....a very nice poem...keep it up...see my other poems too

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