Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, March 24, 2014

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Women I adore
Every opportunity I explore
To praise them in their work
Not with pleasing attitude but with honest words
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

a welcome Lisa Lombardi, Shujat Ahmad, JaiRam Tiwari a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

welcome sarah russel a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2014

welcome Rohani Daud, Maricela Ramírez and Ramesh Rai like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

didnt care for it Landen Aaron15 minutes ago didnt care for it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

Good, just watch fluency. Miss Padishyia13 minutes ago *It's lose, not loose. Also, there were a few awkward sentences in your poem. You might want to review those areas. Looking at your poem as a whole, however, I thought it was very nice. Most of the words at the end of each sentence seemed to flow smoothly. It was just a few that did not quite work out. Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago loose seems correct word madame Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

ARE YOU FAMINIST Saroj Khan15 minutes ago GOOD Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago dear friend/madame.. to adore woman is one of the greatest work if we can do Comment +1

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Gajanan Mishra 24 March 2014

very good writing, thanks.

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Ramesh Rai 24 March 2014

in every form i observe a motherhood hidden in her heart. regards.10+++

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2014

Women I adore Every opportunity I explore

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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