Women Desire Comments

Beautifully penned. Nice easy flow of words to descibe a newly-wed woman's innermost feelings.

True one! A natural phenomenon. Naila

Very beautiful poem...and I quoted every stanza to Express my appreciation... You are a real rhymer.... thanks

you will never be in the BLUE love her true will you promise it too

all the best poetry lovers to you she will for life long glue

don't keep her in suspense she is waiting for you colour her up as in Holi one day would you

and the whole wide world will love her display of harmonically symphony as you parley

go dwell within her and play she will bringflowers in your life's path as you her lay

how the bride lady is weeping and waiting for yee

Her Intense Love to be Wed OK married On seeing the translation now I see