Thursday, July 30, 2009

Women Are The Best Comments

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Woman, Femme
Mujer, Mama
Soul, Ame
Fleur, Flora
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Ana Sanchez 19 July 2018

lovely tribute to woman

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Brian Mawadri 23 February 2017

Beautifully penned......................................

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Chinedu Dike 23 February 2017

Lovely tribute to all women, well articulated and nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 October 2015

They express under stress They still clean our mess Women are the best Because they ace all of the tests. The uniqueness of each woman, the general character of a woman as you see it.. you have brought out very well. thank you dear Poet.

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Jaishree Nair 12 May 2015

Your basic idea was to pay tribute to women.considering that all the lines are aptly penned, but each woman has got her own uniqueness of character. Thanks Your basic idea was to pay tribute to women.considering that all the lines are aptly penned, but each woman has got her own uniqueness of character. Thanks

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Kim Barney 11 May 2015

I think your intent was to pay tribute to women, but I'm sure many would be offended by the line THEY ARE ALL THE SAME. They are all different. Every woman is unique, and every woman is special. My wife, my mother, my grandmothers, my stepmother, my sisters, my stepsisters, my daughters, my granddaughters, my cousins... the list goes on and on. YOUR loved ones and every other woman in the world. Unique and special. In any case, congrats on having it chosen as Poem of the Day!

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Marama Kelly 22 September 2009

Thank you for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us. An interesting read indeed. Although it has a wonderful theme, it does tend to stutter instead of flow freely. I found the imagery that your words painted create a picture in abstract even though the words used describe passionately your views of the feminine persuasion. Overall it is a nice poem to read, although some wording and structure could improve it a bit more to give it flow and rhythmn. Thanks for inviting me to read and many blessings to you

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Ro'ya Abdulaal 04 September 2009

wow, a lovely idea expressed amazingly

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Pamela Jokerst 29 August 2009

I enjoyed the message/concept of your poem that expresses the consistancy that is 'woman' no matter what culture. I like the inclusion of a woman's emotion side offering an inference that even in these emotional 'stress' moments or spin-outs, it's still part of her beauty or what makes her 'woman.' The lines that seemed out of place and threw me off a bit are the lines that discuss the earth: 'the earth will always be round, no matter what, no matter what sound.' I guess is that the speaker in a metaphorical way is comparing the earth to 'woman' as a means to enhance or continue to convey the constantness that is 'woman' and in that-there the beauty lies. Was that your intent or did I get it totally wrong? Over all I see the poem as a tribute to women...thanks.

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Adeiza A. 25 August 2009

This is cool Herbert. Nicely written

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Shirin Sheikhi 23 August 2009

thnank you for such nice expression your poem beautiful specially in concept 10++

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Harold K Schreiberg 23 August 2009

Yes, Women are the best They make life beautiful They make life miserable Thru presence Thru absence Thank you, sir, for sharing your verses

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Not A Dream Choice 23 August 2009

hahahaha yeah I agree :)

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Aron Lelei 23 August 2009

A woman of value, a woman by any name but it is true that women are the best. Nice poem.

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Ravi Sathasivam 23 August 2009

Different type of poem. But understand your feelings. Well said. Great poem. Thanks for sharing with me

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 August 2009

Yeah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 I know this feelingl.... they can cleanse our mess and make us feel so good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! very nicely said.....10.. cheers shan

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Doha Ewiess 22 August 2009

the first stanza is a nice combination between english and french languages :) ...and as usual...a very nice poem

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Rup Pokharel 19 August 2009

Nice piece of art of yours i got to read. Thats why i always say and believe in'GOD CANNOT BE EVERYWHERE SO HE MADE MOTHERS' Worth reading poem..thank you for your pen and brain... Give us more to read... 10++

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Jude Ogunade 18 August 2009

I agree with you! Considering the fact that a woman was made from a man! In order word, if man must be complete, he needs a woman. Hmn! Then woman becomes the better because the inadequacy of man is made adequate in woman. Nice poem and thanks for corresponding with me.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 18 August 2009

Tks, i believe so.. especially our Mom

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