Woman, Femme
Mujer, Mama
Soul, Ame
Fleur, Flora
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Lovely tribute to all women, well articulated and nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
They express under stress They still clean our mess Women are the best Because they ace all of the tests. The uniqueness of each woman, the general character of a woman as you see it.. you have brought out very well. thank you dear Poet.
Your basic idea was to pay tribute to women.considering that all the lines are aptly penned, but each woman has got her own uniqueness of character. Thanks Your basic idea was to pay tribute to women.considering that all the lines are aptly penned, but each woman has got her own uniqueness of character. Thanks
I think your intent was to pay tribute to women, but I'm sure many would be offended by the line THEY ARE ALL THE SAME. They are all different. Every woman is unique, and every woman is special. My wife, my mother, my grandmothers, my stepmother, my sisters, my stepsisters, my daughters, my granddaughters, my cousins... the list goes on and on. YOUR loved ones and every other woman in the world. Unique and special. In any case, congrats on having it chosen as Poem of the Day!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, view and concept with the rest of us. An interesting read indeed. Although it has a wonderful theme, it does tend to stutter instead of flow freely. I found the imagery that your words painted create a picture in abstract even though the words used describe passionately your views of the feminine persuasion. Overall it is a nice poem to read, although some wording and structure could improve it a bit more to give it flow and rhythmn. Thanks for inviting me to read and many blessings to you
I enjoyed the message/concept of your poem that expresses the consistancy that is 'woman' no matter what culture. I like the inclusion of a woman's emotion side offering an inference that even in these emotional 'stress' moments or spin-outs, it's still part of her beauty or what makes her 'woman.' The lines that seemed out of place and threw me off a bit are the lines that discuss the earth: 'the earth will always be round, no matter what, no matter what sound.' I guess is that the speaker in a metaphorical way is comparing the earth to 'woman' as a means to enhance or continue to convey the constantness that is 'woman' and in that-there the beauty lies. Was that your intent or did I get it totally wrong? Over all I see the poem as a tribute to women...thanks.
thnank you for such nice expression your poem beautiful specially in concept 10++
Yes, Women are the best They make life beautiful They make life miserable Thru presence Thru absence Thank you, sir, for sharing your verses
A woman of value, a woman by any name but it is true that women are the best. Nice poem.
Different type of poem. But understand your feelings. Well said. Great poem. Thanks for sharing with me
Yeah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1 I know this feelingl.... they can cleanse our mess and make us feel so good! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! very nicely said.....10.. cheers shan
the first stanza is a nice combination between english and french languages :) ...and as usual...a very nice poem
Nice piece of art of yours i got to read. Thats why i always say and believe in'GOD CANNOT BE EVERYWHERE SO HE MADE MOTHERS' Worth reading poem..thank you for your pen and brain... Give us more to read... 10++
I agree with you! Considering the fact that a woman was made from a man! In order word, if man must be complete, he needs a woman. Hmn! Then woman becomes the better because the inadequacy of man is made adequate in woman. Nice poem and thanks for corresponding with me.
lovely tribute to woman