Monday, April 14, 2008

Womb Comments

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To imagine starting as a thread
And go through this life so spread
Moving on to a chewed like food
To think some can be so rude
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Izik Alcox
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Ashlea Pearson 12 December 2008

To me, this poem speaks of the way we struggle, live and learn, and eventually either benifit, or loose because of our choices. You ended the poem perfectly with the last touch of what becomes of all of us for sure, no matter what path we chose to take. Thanks for recommending this to me, as i really did enjoy reading it.

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Liz Thaugally 19 April 2008

LOVE this, the beginning-the downhill struggle of lifeand detiny/paths we take and the final claim back to mother's earth womb. Well written. Lizelah.xxxx

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