What is a girl
Who has with her only emotions to hurl
Though her childhood she can relish
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Dear Kavya, as a woman I completely agree with your thoughts and feelings. But it is all a part of our life as a woman.in Woman's Era! No doubt at times we long to have been born a boy- but think from the angle of men- they have to face their way in their work places being the bread winner of the family. We can go for work or not - it isn't binding in most cases. You have composed a very excellent poem with rhyme and rhythm right from your heart !
So true and realistic, Kavya! At one point or the other in life, every woman feels this! To sit back and relax for some time is a human need! But how often we, women have to forgo it as something unexpected props up! It may be as simple as the arrival of an unexpected guest! Like you, (to be frank) I too long to be.... if there is another birth! enjoyed reading your poem!
thnx mam for giving an honest opinion on my poem.....yes i totally agree with you regarding men being binded to work...but there are many other areas where women alone has to bear, n men cannot feel the same as they dont have to bear those even once in their lifetime as it is meant only for women! ....thx again for reading n replying....