Woman Of The Night Comments

wow that was an entertaining write indeed...twist in the tale i guess..i was quite in to the poem in the first part but was enthralled by the end....this is a nice interesting one....i ll pay you with 10+++ for the entertainment with love shan.

Really drawn in and then... Cute little ending. Well done

good poetic wit here, lynda...write very much enjoyable...

Written with 'over the top' flair and an eye for the absurd (I sense this actually happened) , this glorious lark of a poem twists like a corpse on the end of a rope. Great fun. Superbly written. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

The real beauty of her you see in the night.

Well, I dare say Linda, 'Mistress of the Whole-Mooned Night', you have certainly piqued my interest this eve in your highly unique intriguing, bewitching fashion; spellbinding, well-versed delineation, incorporating a child-like perspective all the while maintaining a delicious comedic ambience. 'Long black tresses flowing like liquid fire by candlelight, / An air of mystery surrounded her; emanating from her / Like magnetic electrical charges-sparking and snapping; ' 'her victims', you remarked upon? Wouldn't I love being victimised by you? Affirmative, it is past Hallowe'en and the American's Thanksgiving, but I am waiting earnestly to anticipate just what you will write about, as we close in on Christmas?

Glowing with grace and poise... whatever you might be wearing! Love this witty, well structured piece. t x

No hollow Halloween humor here...Healthy & hillarious Halloween hah-hah's here! A fine & amusing Penning'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F j R}

Enjoyed this very much...............hahaha............All the best, Diane

Hahahaha...Surprise ending (in more ways than one!) Cute poem! Hugs, Dee