Woman Of Substance…! Comments

It's a witty description with so many words ending in -y chosen off-offhand to reinforce the theme, enjoyed and loved. :)

The couple you described here is in complimentry relationship, otherwise, sure they would not be together. I wonder what keeps them dancing together or is it a solo dance? Your poem is true reflection of such couple relationships everywhere in life and not just in Islamabad! cheers Rehana Nazli 26/08/09

Ha ha ha....good one...pls read my poem 'let her not sacrifice anymore'...u shall surely like it

Interesting! ! ! There are people like this everywhere - but are they happier than the rest of us? Lovely rhythm and pace and good subject choice.

Nice and rhyme! Glib! Slips down smoothly Leaving template. dr. sakti

When in Rome, do as Romans do. Why not! This is an Isamabadi woman of substance, I am sure plenty envy what she got.

I liked the way you mix wit and wisdom inside your lines there...good piece Saadat...rich in rhyme and rhythm...thanks...10

Interesting observation...liked your way of expression...10...

A woman's of substance indeed, full of lovely words commensurate to the lines, the rhymes too perfect! It interconnects every time the lines are read aloud. Well done...thanks.

Very interesting piece, well written on the life style of your woman of substance...

A beautiful rymme, and great flow, an interesting theme that needs attention.You always write in an interesting manner. Regards

very keen observation of meaningless and insubstantial life of your woman of substance, full of wit, irony, sympathy and very objective. Mamta

Awesome poem. Really shows how class affects society. Good job.

Ammmmmmazing! fine words and rhyme/rhythm! .....10+

Perfect rhyming couplets woven in a meaningful theme..................10

very interesting write..you read it again to really appreciate the cynical outlook with whch its been penned..the first read is simply for the pretty rythmn.

Easy and effortless flow....musical...like to read for many more times....you are a great poet Saadat...10+++++++

Interesting very interesting........

A very easy flow on this poem. There are people who look down on others and its a shame, eventually i hope life makes them realize. A thought provoking poem. Thank you for sharing :)

You know sometimes one paints a picture with words... this one recites itself to you... almost in a whisper...Try reading it a second time...