Sunday, July 12, 2009

Woman Of My Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

If anyone should ask
Tell them I can be found
Locked in my dream
Hugging and kissing you
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Romeo Della Valle
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2010

I cannot blame myself For madly falling in love with you But God for making you so beautiful And putting you on my way....... nice way of feeling indream and enjoying infull.. good composition and real beauty....10

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Amrit Rathi 08 June 2010

Your dream girl beauty, your longing so passionate, and love so intense then why you need to wait to meet again as after all she is your dream-girl. Just invoke the dream, and meet again. Excellent poem I rate 10+

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2010

I cannot blame myself...are u sure that u cannot blame yourself for falling in love? Do you really believe that God put her in front of you after making her so beautiful? one day we shall meet again.. that means u have already met her... so funny way of asking questions to you my dear Romeo. i love ur lines. your passion in these lines and the intensity of desire. thank you

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Jazza Bella 22 September 2009

I just love this poem. The way you write is just a joy. I gave it a ten

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