Friday, March 21, 2014

~~woman~ Man's Greatest Gift! Worship Her! Comments

Rating: 4.1

You have been loved, but WORSHIPED I'm doubtful,
Kindness extended, and nice words just a mouthful?

Many have felt love, in the head or in their pants,
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Chuy Amante
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3) " Her thoughts and her words, channeled from Source, Her ideas, feelings, gestures, perfectly on course! "… the Source!

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2) the near-perfect rhyme scheme exemplifies the beauty of the poem.

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"… bask in God's grandest gift, it is YOU she chose! "… lovely lines.. a perfect ode to womanhood, the entire women communities.. loved it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2020

Her heart is the Avatar we need to gently uncover, Not nice meat, but GOD expressed as Holy Mother! She's not a human animal to be caught and then slaughtered, She IS PERFECT, DIVINE, GOD'S FAVORITE DAUGHTER! ...... touching expression with outstanding conceptualization. Women are our mothers like They should be properly behaved. A beautiful poem on womanhood has been astutely and incisively delineated. Five stars.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2020

I'm here on Earth, as a god I do stand! Here to re-educate women and especially man! Worshiping the divine feminity. tony

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Varsha M 29 May 2020

Very expressive sinking deep down the soul every ornamentation for women is magnificent. There is no second being who is like her.

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Khairul Ahsan 02 March 2020

'Throw down flower petals in her holy path, never direct toward her, your nasty wrath' - yes, so nicely said! I fully agree. A wonderful piece of poetry.

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Aniruddha Pathak 29 January 2020

Fabulous write, many a brilliant line, hard to pick and quote to make a point, And this I accidentally came across, Really, there is so much dross here that it is hard to find out gems like this.

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Sarah Shahzad 23 December 2019

Wonderful, it is an amazing piece of poetry! keep sharing :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 December 2019

Her thoughts and her words, channeled from Source, Her ideas, feelings, gestures, perfectly on course! .. just read your introduction of yourself on the title page. good ideas and vision. thank u for your vision.. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 February 2019

Many(AAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLL) have felt love, in the head or in their.......''' pants'''' LOL,

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Akhtar Jawad 25 April 2018

Go! Buy her chocolates, earrings and clothes, bask is God's grandest gift, it is YOU she chose! Beautiful.

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Upendra Upm 21 February 2018

we all are extensions of an woman.Woman, the mother has the highest stake for the offsprings and her womanhood is primariry and predominantly is derived from this motherhood, from nothing else. excellent poem

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Akhtar Jawad 02 November 2017

Her love will conquer you, unite nations and more, Unfathomable bliss, impossible not to love and adore! Not only these two wonderful lines, the entire poem is a master piece.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 September 2017

WOW WOW AND ONLY WOW YOU know why and how to WORSHIP a beauty called LADY GREAT poetry read xxxxxx1000000 times worthy till it flows out of ur veins as such eventually my poetry s most metaphorically

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Jeanette Telusma 23 March 2017

Wow... so beautifully written, so beautifully expressed. Thank you! !

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Rebecca Navarre 03 February 2017

A Very Interesting Poem! ! ! ! ! Style Very Unique! ! ! ! ! Hope And Wish The Best For You! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing! ! ! ! ! 10+++++

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Terry Craddock 12 December 2016

'Make her bed, fold her clothes, wash her dishes, give and keep giving into all of her wishes! ' I have a feeling the butler and maid were invented for this, becasue in the common art of full time devotion friends family lovers all prove to miss, the full time worship servant mark, if you want worship for free go ask the lark. nice poem enjoyed :)

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Clarence Prince 12 December 2016

Yes, let's worship God; and also, let's show extreme respect unto all women, I truly thank God for them.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 December 2016

She is the most beautiful creation of the God. She is the idol of compassion, love and tolerance. We should not take her to be weak and must show respect. Thanks for sharing such a nice poem.

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