Monday, February 26, 2018

Woman In My Dream Comments

Rating: 4.9

My dream was to be a Jane Austen - or a Virginia Woolfe, whose 'stream of consciousness' touched the world,
or Kadambari - the muse who inspired the Bard in Bengali Literature.

a few fearless women -
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Sheikh Shadi Marjan 07 July 2024

Good Poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2022

Happy women's day

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 09 August 2020

This is the second time this poem has been chosen as POD on August 8,2020. I am getting a lot of inspiring comments from other poets to my email address. Surprisingly and unfortunately, I don't see any of the comments on this page. Feeling really sad that I am not able to reply to those beautiful messages. I have informed PH administration, and they have assured me that the problem will be taken care of. Thanks to all members for their support.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 August 2020

Oh how beautifully presented the vitality of a woman, there is no doubt that a woman is stronger than anybody else if empowered and understood properly she can do miracles.......very touching as well as inspiring 10++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 August 2020

A wonderful poem! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being featured as Poem of the Day!

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Ruta Mohapatra 08 August 2020

Quite true! What we are doing today was unthinkable a two generations back! Congrats on poem of day!

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Kevin Patrick 08 August 2020

Incredible dedication to the woman and all their struggles, for liberty and independence. The personal tale of your own grandmothers struggles are enlightening of what the average women faced, and still faces. May we and future generations not forget what the women of yesterday put their lives on the line for. A wonderful poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 August 2020

You are woman You are an independent existence You have all rights to live on this earth independently No, no need to be Jane, Elizabeth, Kadambini..... You are yourself You are full of conscience as human You have brave heart Let the world know that you are the full sun of the day and moon of the night Be yourself

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 August 2020

Sorry Jane Austen, I would rather be my Grandma's granddaughter, Before Anyone else! ...wonderful expression Be yourself at first Be brave heart righteously wherever you go No need to follow others or to be depended on others Congrats for being selected again this beautiful empowerment poem as POD

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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2020

Great tribute to all women of the world- past or present. They may be lacking on one thing (say formal education) but they were worldly wise. Thanks for sharing exceptional piece of poetry.

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Bharati Nayak 08 August 2020

Again Congratulations for this amazing poem selected as the Poem of the Day. It is a great tribute to your grandmother as well as all women who struggled to read and write in spite of all road blocks and paved the way for emancipation of women of future generation.What a beautiful closing line- - 'Sorry Jane Austen, I would rather be my Grandma's granddaughter, Before Anyone else! '

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 August 2020

Congratulations being selected as the Member Poem Of Thge Day, dear poetess. A heartwarming poem about the weak, but the strongest inn reality. A most beautiful Tribute to All Women, starting with our grandmothers on to us the granddaughters. I have enjoyed a very lot, this poem full of brilliance and humor. This poem was chosen twice, last year and today same day 0808 2019 and 0808 2020

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Chinedu Dike 20 December 2019

Really a poignant piece on women empowerment written in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. A beautiful tribute to your granny ceremoniously rich in tone. Thanks for sharing, madam.

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Savita Tyagi 23 October 2019

Great poem. Just having pride in womanhood is good enough for me. Woman of all ages have faced challenges in their own time. We have to give them their due respect. Proud of my ma and grand ma!

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 23 October 2019

I totally agree with you. Women in the past have suffered too much and paved the way for us so we can enjoy freedom, equal opportunities, respect! Proud of their achievements!

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 August 2019

Hi Malabika, You wrote: I love stories from Mahabharata and Ramayana, and wish I could bring some of those stories and memorable characters to my writing! ” If you like stories from our epics, you may like my poems “Sunahsepha” and “Sarpasatram” too. You have already read my poem on Ahalya, “And Silence is What I Choose”. Love and regards Unnikrishnan

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I will definitely read the poems you have mentioned. Thank you for letting me know.

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Unnikrishnan E S 22 August 2019

Hi Malabika, Loved this poem. You spoke about women of strength. May I invite you to read my serial poems 1. Yayati 2. Satyawati Both the poems are built on story threads purloined from Mahabharata.

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I am definitely going to read those two poems - I am familiar with the character of Satyawati. I love stories from Mahabharata and Ramayana, and wish I could bring some of those stories and memorable characters to my writing! Thank you.

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Carl Roussell 08 August 2019

A well deserved poem of the day that has been added to my favourites!

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Thank you, Dear Poet! To your favourites! So delighted!

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Lyn Paul 08 August 2019

Congratulations for your beautiful and strong write on an incredible Woman and for other Women.

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Thank you so much, Lyn! I am extremely delighted to share this poem with my friends at PH! I really believe in women empowerment and the unimaginable contribution of the women who came before us!

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Rajnish Manga 08 August 2019

Bravo! A great tribute to a modern woman who is liberated, educated, self- reliant and independent in their outlook and making important choices in life. But not detached from her roots. Thanks for sharing this powerful write. Congrats for its being Poem of the Day, Malabika ji.

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Dear Poet, thank you so much! Your comments are so valuable to me! I am extremely delighted to share particularly this poem, because I am really passionate about women empowerment and the fact that the women who came before us, paved the way so we could walk with our heads high!

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Julia Luber 08 August 2019

I am sure Jane Austen would forgive you! For your preference and appreciation of the woman who came before who lit the way!

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You are right - I think, Jane Austen wouldn't mind, she has a lot of followers! Thank you very much, really insightful comment!

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