Woman: An Article Of Trade Comments

amazing. really it is, its sincere and your a poetess, i tottally agree.

Very beautiful. Women's issues are very close to my heart, I love this.

It is very mature write up...does not fit to your age.carry on you will shine.

very powerful.. a really good write.. please keep writing inspiring poems like this.. <3 spread the love

strong an potent theme well wrtten..... forces such an important topic....mature and deep :) sat

True painting of what the world has chosen to call woman. Nicely drawn. Thanks.

You've presented a great poem having issuing the problem of woman in this era. Woman is the simple of love and mercy. No doubt, in the preset time, people are using woman like an article of trade and sometimes like a show piece. You must remember that each prophet and great people has a mother that is woman. So, being woman the matter of proud.

Touching, it digs the depth of a lonely mind.

I have to agree with Rafiq, your a very good poetess, and u are the voice of many women whose voices go unheard, very good! I liked it alot <3

Young brains have a fresh energy if they utilize it.I appreciate that you are utilizing your energy to create poetry in younger age..Hope it ll help to trace the meanings of your existence in this world. You are a good poetess.If reader try he can enter into your river of vivid expressions, view a tide of sadness and grief of woman existence in your poems and easily unfold the hidden incident or sensitive turn in your life overwhelming your soul, body and mind...but in my opinion reader should not completely relate your poetry with biographical back ground and not consider you as first person singular or protagonist of your poems...No doubt sorrows of woman are vast but she has many faces and inner worlds you can depict in your poetry.Hope you ll explore new windows in future.

very nice expression, like that.

the very first line is inspiring and speaking itself. It is really an inspirational poem. great work.