Freshness of shower
Fragrance of flower
Music of river
Warmth to prevent shiver
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you keep the rhythm and the rhyming ending of the sentences.. it is really very m uch priseworthy. you comment and praise the virtues of women. World of perfection Sea of emotion Meaning of devotion Feel of serenity Face of divinity. Therare poets who are realistic and poets who are not realistic. may experience of life make you a wonderful poet. That is my great wish for you. thank you for sharing.
Very well written. Exactly the right choice of words, melodiously joined together. I like the two extremes put against each other. You got so many praises of women in this comments section on this poem, called woman. Really a great write. In movies we tend to like to second one, but in our house the first. :)
wow its was wonderul and nothing was wrong with this poem. as along u write with ur heart, its will sound amazing. 10+++
Oh my God, I am speechless. You have presented such a great analysis here. What impressed me the most are the lines: World of perfection Sea of emotion Meaning of devotion Feel of serenity Face of divinity and Motives malign Addiction of wine Unsolvable puzzle Signs of trouble Anger of lord Thirst of a sword Temptation to lure Well done.
posotive and negative aspects to a woman, well written, a TEN!
this is just beautiful it's perfect i love this i will give +10
Although, I am girl.I have to confess that you are really true and totally right! ! A poem written perfectly :) ! 10
A brilliant write! This describes just how complexed a woman can be. The latter of the poem has the emphasis of a woman scorned! well done, : D
this is a really good poem and it reads clearly and gets the message across i really like
Light and Shade on women…well it is good one…but darks have been overturned by the lights… congrats for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS In MPL clicked n