Sunday, July 12, 2009

Woman Comments

Rating: 5.0

Woman,
Ceaseless tenderness, beauty and grace
Is your name
The chaotic world is held firm and steady
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Madam Anonymous
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Refai Tommas 15 July 2009

I was certainly delighted to read this poem of yours and so thanks a lot for inviting me.You have skillfully presented some of the numerous admirable qualities of women, and this is in itself an epic achievement.There is a kind of Metaphisical images in your poem in which you tried to mix between two opposite things and yet made them sound as if they were harmonious, like when u said 'Thus you die and thus you live'.I do wish you succeed in your life and i hope you send me more invitations. Sincerely Yours

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Rajaram Ramachandran 12 July 2009

There is no man without a woman. The last three letters of the word woman is man. So, man is within the woman. Out of woman, motherhood is the greatest status God has given her. M.A. has brought out the role of woman very nicely.

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Catrina Heart 12 July 2009

Fabulous accolade authored...10+++

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Alf Hutchison 12 July 2009

Thank you Madam for your kind invite to read what I considered to be an absolutely enchanting write. and now I am going to read more... regards Alf

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Ted M 12 July 2009

A nice tribute to a Woman. Very well said.

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Marieta Maglas 12 July 2009

nice cognitive metaphor; ''The chaotic world is held firm and steady In your affectionate brace'' embedded in this wonderful elegy....10++ from me

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Henry Brown 12 July 2009

Really written with passion...is that your real age in your Biography? You are still young at heart..the heart of a woman

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Laurie Hill 12 July 2009

And a noble tradition you carry..........excellent read.....10

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Adi Cox 12 July 2009

This is high praise indeed, for woman. As I read I like the rythm of this poem. The way that the rhyming scheme invites the reader to speed through the last three lines of each verse. Nice poem.10/10.

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Vinod Kumar 12 July 2009

Motherhood is the divine blessing, no doubt abut it, but we the children did not understand and apreciate the proper way, both the boys and girls, Thanks for the very Important message to the society,10+++

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Patrick A. Martin 12 July 2009

I like your ritting it is simple and straightforward lovely work I vaoted a 10

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Siddharth Singh 12 July 2009

No wonder you are a women be it anonymous. Amazing!

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~ Jon London ~ 12 July 2009

Where would us men be without you, woman was the lords greatest creation that teaches men how to love and share that love....most get it right....some are still learning.................beautiful piece....10++++

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2009

i uphold the wisdom and truth in this write...perpetual peace would have flourished in this wolrd if women were the rulers of important nations...woman is the epitome of love compassion and peace...excellent write 'Anony'...10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 12 July 2009

wonderful poem....all your experience brought to the fore. simply expressed. thank you.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 July 2009

A very true picture of the feminist idealogy. Every facet of a woman's life is well summarised with poetic wisdom. Best Regards Naseer

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Obinna Eruchie 12 July 2009

Interesting piece on 'Woman' well written.

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Indira Babbellapati 12 July 2009

starting with tenderness you ended it up on a realistic note maintaining the consistency of the emotion all through...yes, this is what woman was, woman is, woman will be!

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Woman, Ceaseless tenderness, beauty and grace Is your name The chaotic world is held firm and steady In your affectionate brace in any form u r great wheather as mother, sisiter or wife....10 read mine o, mother, anywhere, miss i miss you, mary to marry and butterflies around....

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Carol Gall 12 July 2009

very nice write M A women are the one total necessity in life

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