Thursday, April 23, 2009

Woman Comments

Rating: 4.8

O mighty creation of god but slighted,
Since the dawn of life,
You bear the insult and heavily suffered,
And carry spiritual light, glory of civilization and strife.
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Dr. Yogesh Sharma
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A B Faniki 09 August 2019

The rhyme and rhythm of the poem is brilliantly crafted and what a beautifu subject crown it.Cheers

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Eyan Desir 22 June 2009

Woman! Sepent in the grass Angels without feathers Good write Doctor thats how I think about woman

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Nicely rhymed. Your words have a lot of power. Good poem!

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a good tribute to woman..woman definitely are different..and that should be cherished and appreciated..thanks for sharing

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Abida Rahman 09 May 2009

Very beautiful. I wonder still why you wanted me to read this one. I like it because I feel that as a woman, I must always prove myself twice as much as men do... but still I don't complain because I simply know that it will never change in the eye of human... So I continue to be strong and stay close to God... I feel that your poem relates to this, but maybe it has a different connotation.. that's how I read it.

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Marla Smith 06 May 2009

This poem says alot about what you see and what you think. It is also very decribing and I like that.

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Kara Vernon 05 May 2009

Good job on the poetic intensions.

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Ramesh T A 24 April 2009

Poetic potentiality is quite revealing! Please keep it up!

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