One man closed his eyes,
God took one rib and
Gave birth to a woman.
Perfectly curved from clay
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Dear Desire, Nouvel presentation. But there is no fulfilment to one without the other. Perhaps, that's why your title goes like WoMan. Man interwoven in woman The image of serpent, perhaps, does not fit here. Thanks for sharing Rajkumar
The poem is a tribute to women but serpent...well...well...well...very creative!
A wonderful tribute to women like us! So lovely.... Thanks for sharing!
I really enjoyed your poem. You have used wonderful imagination to bring alive a woman. It is this unique style that makes this poem a 10. Karin Anderson
The word 'Man' is hidden inside the word 'Woman' So there is no man without woman or there is no woman without man.
Your poem will always be still standing. What would world be worth without the woman? Good topic, good workmanship. Greetings. :) Maria Barbara Korynt
good description for women i love the way you talk about it nice poem and keep writing on
oh, this is nice.Written so well and good flow of words.Keep it up Hugs, meggie
Eyan: Great introspective thought. You did get some of that right on the button. Adeline
This is nice. Very good. YOur Oranges could be apples, thats all.
Facinating read, glad you still have faith in meeting a WoMan. ...