Sunday, March 30, 2008

Woman Comments

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Woman, oh Woman,
Why do you try me,
Why do you shake me,
Break me
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David Lewis Paget
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Paul Widdecombe 28 May 2009

Sounds like you are well in there with Battleship Babs, Mr Paget.

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Barbara Terry 30 March 2008

David, when a man is not right for us, we will stay with him, and treat him as a friend, but that is all. When the man is right for us, we will latch onto him with all of our might. But when we are abused by men, we will sink them. Your poem is written with heartfelt emotion, and describes the breakdown of friendship and romance between two people. Thank you for sharing, David. Love & hugs, Barbara

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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