Friday, September 26, 2008

Woman Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a woman.
I am strong, because I cannot be weak.
I hold everything together, take care of everyone.
I am on call all day, every day, all week.
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Ashley Jarrett
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Ophelia Payne 28 September 2008

And it is this that gives us wisdom

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Fay Slimm 28 September 2008

Ashley this is a strong and appealing poem. You write with a dark strength which is riveting to the reader. Women everywhere will associate with the sentiments you have expertly but freshly worded here. I look forward to more work which you will, I am sure be producing with such talent. Greetings from Cornwall U.K. from Fay. - a Ten for this one.

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James Timothy Jarrett 27 September 2008

Powerful and touching. You sound to me like you have a hidden steel and inner strength,

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Anand Dixit 26 September 2008

I am very much inspired by this. I am going to write along these lines. I am going to call it as 'Women are from Venus: Inspired by Ashley Jarett'. I have given a 10..

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Adam Day 26 September 2008

Ashley, You have tweaked my mind. amazing touch of words. i look forward to more poems from you.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 26 September 2008

The intensity of the poem touches the heart. And the truth of it, bruises it.Thank you.

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 September 2008

what an expression and this right is so thought provoking, , ,10

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