**** Woman *** Comments

i feel so loved! wonderful poem. it make women feel good about ourselves.

I love it...not just because it's a dedicatioin to women, but because it beautiful...it's great...

Awesome! ! ! ! What a lovely poem for women! ! ! ! I love each line of this poem. Thanks for sharing!

Very grand poetry! ! ! ! ! loved this one!

lovely poem.....10...thanks for sharing...

Your mail invitation to read your works came just as I was getting somewhat fed up with all of the childish love poems here on Y/A. Thank you for the invitation which has allowed me to read some of your poetry. I am glad that I accepted the invitation for what I have read so far has been quite inspiring My thanks to you. Robert

Very lovely poem i give 10 stars

i like this very much, something for the women

i like it... its nice and well i cant really find the words its good, it cool, pretty, true and like it lol... ;)

as moslem as myself, I feel you admire woman at peak of life. very touching!

Good thoughts, but I would like a construction that didn't sound so prosaic/

women woman such a strong powerful word and so is men man....... for man can't live on this earth without women for women can't live on this earth without man......it's divine order you deserve a trillion for this piece.......1000000000000000000000+++++++++++

a poem well written...well dedicated...women will definetely love this write 10

great poem! my favorite line is 'the man you own', a strong sense of female power and importance radiates from this poem. Well Done.

A very flattering portrait of women - their strength, their resilience, and their beauty. My favorite line is hands down is 'even the moon envies the shine in you.' You've thawed a heart long frozen...wonderful work.10 Caroline

You provide a lot of wonderful things in praise of women. Nicely done. To know whether this is truly acceptable, you must ask the opinion of the women. Thanks for your tribute to them.

I adore this beautiful creation. So moving. Brought tears to my eyes as my heart swells reading along such passion. The lines that shall stay with me indefinately are: 'Even the moon envies the shine in you. And the Sund says 'Can you be my next asteroid...'' and the second is: '....you're the sun that shines on every soul'. My heart has melted. Thank you for the honor of experiencing such a beautiful work of art

fine piece of literature.very good

I absolutley love it =] You are definitley a great poet

or oh woman.. taken from the ribs of Adam not from his feet to be stomped unto.. but near his heart to be cared and loved whole life through... ......thanks for this heart warming tribute to women...a piece that expresses great respect and love to all the women on earth...describes what a woman is...my 10++ for you ...