Succinct and incisive, he said its over.
Struck by lightning, she fell on her knees.
Delusioned and distressed,
stared at him walking away.
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Brought a tiny new life into this world and sculpted a man, to triumph as a woman. wow wow wowwwwwwwwww what a grand finale! ! ! ! ! ! ! --and sculpted a man to triumph as a woman -10 anjali
Good poems Mr. Singh, If in case you are interested to publish your poems get in touch with me. Keep it up! !
the true essence of being a woman.... you've written it beautifully and you have given every woman a tribute of respect and gratefulness and appreciation very significant write... 10+++ Maia
It’s a poem on glory to woman and motherhood… the ultimate culmination… You’ve nicely brought-alive the gloss of woman…thanks… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
I salute this woman......hats off to her......life is too short....let not one incident mar your entire outlook......and hats off to you for portraying a woman of substance.
what is over..a relationship...you pack this incident finely in a poem
Written with hearty feel making the reader too feel it...successful choice of words...well done
Simply awesome. I m sure u have captured the heart of all females through ur masterpiece. U have beutifully portrayed emotions of the female. U deserve more than 10+ no doubt.
Made a revisit to experience the power in a woman's heart, her resolve, her pride in her motherhood. The man who abandoned her becomes worthless trash before her!