To fulfil immortality in life
Is woman's truth
Whose sole deed is
To disclose us to ourselves,
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An excellent tribute to women. Each and every stanza presents a wonderful attribute of a woman.So beautifully expressed. A must read for all especially women. Onto my Poem List.
Makes me very curious........I wished I could view the female fan club you've got! Women swooning over you! , , , , and I've been on another planet! What pleases me no end...... is that your happy!
In the veil of desire! ! ! Woman. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I much enjoy reading your work, this is a wonderful tribute to us women. TFS
Enjoyed your poem, its imagery and cadence. The contrast between in and out could be stronger. However, I like it, good work.
To fulfil immortality in life Is woman's truth... Yet no man is whole in himself Save she's the rest of him.... Revered when alive, Venerated when dead, ... Beautiful expressions for woman
You lavish well merited praise on women. We are all born from women, hence your mention of, 'immortality in life'. I think you are partly right when you say, 'no man is whole in himself/ Save she's the rest of him' Like her being the 'better half' of a marriage. I think some men, though, manage to define themselves independent of women. A most stimulating poem.
A beautiful well written masterpiece...i love it. Thank you.
in her is the end of breeding. A great poem on women, she is wonderful in her all the costumes.
Heart can understand only by love, Awareness can touch only by virtue, So rich in variety Each perfect in its own line- light of love alive, home in flesh, Revered when alive, Venerated when dead, in her is the end of breeding........so moving. Beautiful poem on woman. It is great tribute to all women. Thanks for sharing.
A magnificent tribute to women in general with your creativity and panache you have written a poem of great beauty!
I like the idea of love and women intertwined in this poem - perilous but worthwhile! :)
Profound truth to light in the form of your musing is as usual a master piece!
I enjoy reading your poems, this especially is a wonderful piece. Thanks for expressing this point with profound eloquence.
Yes somehow I feel the first line is a truth. Women fulfill immortality with procreation. Lovely piece this is.: -)
finding and appreciating women's worth is a great thing in life because very rare people do that especially in the third world countries
Very good format on your poem and very much enjoyed reading it.