Monday, February 18, 2008

Woman Comments

Rating: 4.5

To fulfil immortality in life
Is woman's truth
Whose sole deed is
To disclose us to ourselves,
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Ellen Ni Bheachain 28 April 2020

Very good format on your poem and very much enjoyed reading it.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 April 2020

An excellent tribute to women. Each and every stanza presents a wonderful attribute of a woman.So beautifully expressed. A must read for all especially women. Onto my Poem List.

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Ms Doubtfire 29 December 2019

Makes me very curious........I wished I could view the female fan club you've got! Women swooning over you! , , , , and I've been on another planet! What pleases me no end...... is that your happy!

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 October 2019

In the veil of desire! ! ! Woman. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Luz Hanaii 31 August 2019

I much enjoy reading your work, this is a wonderful tribute to us women. TFS

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Robert Louis Dummett 31 August 2019

Enjoyed your poem, its imagery and cadence. The contrast between in and out could be stronger. However, I like it, good work.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 May 2019

To fulfil immortality in life Is woman's truth... Yet no man is whole in himself Save she's the rest of him.... Revered when alive, Venerated when dead, ... Beautiful expressions for woman

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Anjandev Roy 26 April 2019

Wonderful and insightful. Thank u. Anjandev Roy.

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Michael Walker 14 February 2019

You lavish well merited praise on women. We are all born from women, hence your mention of, 'immortality in life'. I think you are partly right when you say, 'no man is whole in himself/ Save she's the rest of him' Like her being the 'better half' of a marriage. I think some men, though, manage to define themselves independent of women. A most stimulating poem.

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Kenneth Maswabi 01 February 2019

A beautiful well written masterpiece...i love it. Thank you.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 January 2019

WHAT A LOVELY POEM ALL ABUT A WOMAN NEXT TO GOD

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Bing Hua 04 December 2018

Good poem! Woman is spring and warm!

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Akhtar Jawad 03 July 2018

in her is the end of breeding. A great poem on women, she is wonderful in her all the costumes.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 June 2018

Heart can understand only by love, Awareness can touch only by virtue, So rich in variety Each perfect in its own line- light of love alive, home in flesh, Revered when alive, Venerated when dead, in her is the end of breeding........so moving. Beautiful poem on woman. It is great tribute to all women. Thanks for sharing.

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Hazel Durham 18 December 2017

A magnificent tribute to women in general with your creativity and panache you have written a poem of great beauty!

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Elle Smith 18 June 2017

I like the idea of love and women intertwined in this poem - perilous but worthwhile! :)

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Queeny Gona 25 May 2017

Profound truth to light in the form of your musing is as usual a master piece!

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Jeanette Telusma 29 April 2017

I enjoy reading your poems, this especially is a wonderful piece. Thanks for expressing this point with profound eloquence.

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Iquo Umoh 07 May 2015

Yes somehow I feel the first line is a truth. Women fulfill immortality with procreation. Lovely piece this is.: -)

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Prasanna Kumari 09 November 2012

finding and appreciating women's worth is a great thing in life because very rare people do that especially in the third world countries

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