Sunday, March 4, 2018

Woman 3 - She Sells Sea Shells At The Sea Shore Comments

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When I visited the Andaman islands,
I met an interesting young woman,
She was selling sea shells at the sea shore.
I was attracted to the pearls and semi-precious stones
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Veena Muralidharan 22 July 2020

Such a lovely poem ma'am. There is so much apathy towards the plight of such women. Most women are just taken for granted and the world assumes that this is the only role that befits them. Nobody bothers to understand her dreams and aspirations unless she fights for it. Chandini portrays every such woman who is unable to rise above her domestic drudgery. Thank you for writing such a beautiful and empathic poem.

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Indira Renganathan 14 June 2018

A sample story from the cheated striving women's life.... touching yet admirable....you have presented it very well...an interesting write....thank you Geeta...thanks for all your comments and support....God bless you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 March 2018

Though I couldn't visit the the shore of Kala Pathar beach in Havelock Island practically yet I visited the shop of pearls and semi-precious stones belong to Tapori through your poem. Going through the inscription I knew the sad story of Tapori, a special woman of Havelock Island, which is touchingly and impressively painted by you with nice dictions. Thank u dear Dr. Geeta madam for sharing this travelling poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 March 2018

The story of Tapori is touching and the poetess has described it in very impressive manner., a beautiful poem.

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Thank you Akhtar Sahab. God bless.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 March 2018

A beautiful poem! Loved the expression! The line, 'An unnamed bond of purity like the pearls' is just immaculate! Thanks for sharing dear madam....10

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Dr, Dillip, thank you so much. very very kind of you.

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Susan Williams 08 March 2018

Thank you for sharing this memory- -you made me feel that I was right there on that island with you and meeting that woman in her jewelry shop. Take me to more places to meet more people and hear their stories! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you! ! !

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Susan, thank you so much for your sweet words of encouragement. There are a lot of people in and around me with tales of frustrations. Yes, i shall write about them, specially the women of india. Their stories need to be known. Thank you Susan, once again, for reading this true story.

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Loke Kok Yee 08 March 2018

Life is indeed hard and unfair, I hope she will find the happiness that she so deserves. Such is the reality of life, but the strong will persevere. Thanks for sharing your moving poem.

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Loke, thank you so much. I am happy that you are back.

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Rini. 05 March 2018

A great tribute to Tapori..10

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Thank you Rini. You are an angel.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 March 2018

Such a well penned poem👍👍👍

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Thank you Bernard for your generous comment.

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