Friday, February 5, 2016

Woe Betide The Unwary Comments

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Woe betide the unwary
engulfed in worldly pleasures
Accustomed to seeking the material well-being
For if we had been blind
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Sofia Kioroglou
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Konab Ghumman 11 March 2019

WELL WRITTEN read my poem nd comment stay blessed

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Chinedu Dike 21 February 2017

Piece of elegance with beautiful rendition of words. Lovely poem written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Sofia.

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Barry Middleton 17 February 2016

I like it. I think of Eden's apple, desire and wanting and greed. Humans are never satisfied and yet we give lip service to the notion that the simple things are the best. Nice work!

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Sofia Kioroglou 17 February 2016

Thank you so much Barry and God bless you. This poem really resonates with me. I give my battles to become humble and unassuming every day. Be humble and you will be blessed... I live by this motto. Have a most beautiful day and be blessed

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2016

Worldly pleasures lead us off the works of the truth. Nice piece of work.

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Dimitrios Galanis 05 February 2016

Its wording to be admired.

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