Wobble Comments

Wonderful poem on Monsoon Weather. Striking imagery! 10+++

The land lying parched is bathed in the first rains of monsoon giving a new spurt of life to all vegetation! The atmosphere, though cloudy and hazy, is so very pleasant! You are able to see Gods mercy showering down in the falling rain! A great write!

Yeah right- Monsoon weather is glorifying God's name, nice poem

Another great piece of work that vividly portrays the wonders and beauty of nature. A well crafted write.10++++

Bubbles of cloud are falling down, Leathery wind is nibbling leaves, Dark cloud is roaring far abode, Jasmine plants are swinging in love........beautiful words! An excellent poem! (10)

A fine write- - - - - -10