Wo shaqs
Wo ajeeb sa shaqs
Jiske lafzon main latafat
Ankhon main shararat
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You have hit it beautifully! ! 'Wafadar to sab soch te hai ke hum hote hai / Par kahi jake hum khud se hi bewafaayi karte hai / Auron ka kya kasoor? ' Beautiful verses.. Just beautiful..
Very amazingly drafted poem about love an life. This imagery speaks about life a lot. Interesting sharing done.10
Nyc one indeed......pyaar mei dard aur pyaar ka dard aaaahhh........thanks for sharing.....i would like you to read my poems too....aakash
Kiseke bichaRne ka is qadr khubsurat andaz e bayan sirf aaphi kar sakti hain Aarzooji. Duniya ki ranginiyon main Apni asliyat ko bhool gaya Jag sansar se haar gaya Pyar ko apne maar gaya jab apna pyaar is duniya k liye koi choR de tou wo beshak...apne pyaar ku bhool jata hai apni asaliyat ku bhool jata hai. wo jeete ji mar jata hai..10+++...loved and enjoyed
Wo jo kabhi Shaqs hua karta tha, Ab nahi raha, apna wajood kho gaya, ansoo dekar kisi ki ankhon mein Who dhuAa Dhuaa sa ho gaya...........Kuch aysa mehsoor kiya maine apki khoobsoorat Nazm padh kar..........Loved it Masha-Allah kis khoobsurti se aapki kalam bolti hai dil ke afsaane..........Beyond ratings yet maximum, that's my limit.
Pazeerai ka shukriya, ye khoobsurat lafz mujhe aur likhne par majboor karte hai. Jo aas paas dekhti hun mehsoos karti hun bas likh deti hun Asim. Shukriya is nazm ki baarikiyon ko mehsoos karne ke liye. Allaah tumhe khush rakhe.
Peace to the world! With the minds that care. Thanks for sharing.