Thursday, March 22, 2018

Wives And The Twelfth Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

In teen age are bath of steam,
During conjugal life they are ice cream,
Now a cup of tea!
Wives always the Lady Lea,
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Khairul Ahsan 22 April 2018

'Wives always the Lady Lea, And husbands, twelfth man of the team! ' - ha ha ha, wonderfully said! It often is the case, whether we admit or not.

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Khalid Saifullah 22 March 2018

A very interesting Limerick, like Kumarmani Mahakul I also enjoyed every line.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 March 2018

Every line in this poem amazingly speaks about humor and you are very clever to present this brilliant fun giving poem. Amazing really! ...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 March 2018

A poem with a witty humor coupled with a funny picture. The husband is always in the stands waiting to be called upon by his wife..if he is needed...Enjoyed reading it..10

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