Witnessing Trust In You Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Witnessing Trust In You

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Very deep love time sings in heart
Each beat transmits webs to you
Dear beloved super lover you know
I am just witnessing this view.

I have trust in you, you have on me
I have noticed my values you teach
Day comes to replace night in light
You come in life to revive heaven.

Renovating mind I see and feel sky
Universe is filled with wonder only
Here I am there you are still in one
Far galaxy also has unity we witness.

Trust is within you and also within me
Feeling importance we proceed ahead
Love is eternal as we both are eternal
But you are father and I am a child.

Monday, September 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 05 September 2016

Wonderful poetry with effortless flow of thought I did feel the sky in your words, day comes to replace night in light! Great words

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 06 September 2016

eternal love to trust the wings highly spiritual, mind blowing dear poet

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Tom Billsborough 06 September 2016

Love the spirituality of this poem. Great work, dear friend

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Akhtar Jawad 06 September 2016

Trust is within you and also within me A great divine poem.........................

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 06 September 2016

Love is eternal as we both are eternal But you are father and I am a child. Wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem

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Aarzoo Mehek 21 December 2024

Lovey poem it teaches love and trust

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Rebecca Navarre 21 December 2024

In all that surrounds we witness the Love of Our Father! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 21 December 2024

Every word Oh, so meaningful! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 21 December 2024

Ever so heart warming! Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 21 December 2024

So deeply, deeply beautiful! .. While shinning with inspiration and wisdom! ..

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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