Why are you so nervous and concerned
In witnessing His presence whom you call God?
You don’t have to be so meticulous
Not even to meditate day and night
...
Read full text
Wow yes God created everything and your imagery is poetic and charming to read of sir. I always enjoy God poems. And u wrote it in fine way so that added to its greatness. God is everywhere yes. Thumbs up.
You are absolutely right Amitava! This is the kind of religion I believe in and this the kind of prayer, I like to make! Beautiful ideas put in a lovely poem! A 10
Thank you Valsa for appreciating this write