Saturday, December 17, 2011

Witnesses Of Justice Comments

Rating: 5.0

They say they saw
Then they go and lie
Put people in prison
for a crime
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Dave Alan Walker
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Heyyou Boy 03 January 2012

Very good poem. If only enough people felt this way. Imagine what a better world this could be.

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Crimson Love 25 December 2011

Phenomenal poem, truly incredible, short, but filled with meaning.

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Unwritten Soul 23 December 2011

Oh how deep the feel you shared here B.D, we need a stable balance/scales to see the true weight of justice, lies, mistakes and truth.. Sometimes the thing we live here so clouded with uncertainty, when truth accused for lies, and wrong wear good-look to disguise eyes, I cry for who innocent locked in this life, but the one like you keep inspiring make life brighter and smile more than a little..keep it up for strong voice B.D_Unwritten Soul

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Jacqui Broad 23 December 2011

Hi Dave, I really admire this poem. There are so many Paul's in prison. All over the world. What I cannot grasp, is people getting sent to jail for stealing because they were hungry. While the fat cats (drug lords, corrupt fraudulant ministers, etc) gets away with murder. This poem points out how invaluable the justice system is. Great one!

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Robert Beck 21 December 2011

Another good one Dave.

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Alex Kult 21 December 2011

great poem. nicely structured and brings the point across very clearly. good job =)

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Viraj Gupta 20 December 2011

wow! really well written man.

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Sajna Kailas 20 December 2011

really a good work! let us hope for a noble generation and humanity! ! keep it up! God Bless You! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Salema Khatun 18 December 2011

really many people lie they could not fight logically and legally please read my poem 'the idea of an idea'

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