Tuesday, April 9, 2019

Witness Comments

Rating: 5.0

If love is sweet enough I shall get it responded
If eyelids are down your coral lips will be up
Listen to the cheeks, pink colour I have brought
Aurora I shall scatter on the face just a close-up
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 June 2019

A wonderful poem of love. Very passionate and touching. Liked the last four amazing lines. Beautifully written.

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Konab Ghumman 10 April 2019

Each and every line of his poem is so beautiful and expressive.

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Khalid Saifullah 09 April 2019

A wonderful Urdu poem nicely wrote in English.

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