"You are riding on my nerves"
You say, and push me away
With your hands so divine,
But little did you know,
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It struck the deep thinnest twig of feel in me, in exquisite recumbent packets! A great heart-smiting write! Keep it up!
Wow i like this one, definitely can feel the flow in this poem. Keep on writting Shouvik! ! !
Elegant write, done it in beautifully flow. I like the playing words the arrangement of lines..it really a nicely done by you..keep it up for more! _Unwritten Soul
I really do like this piece; it's sweet! :) I wonder what relationship the speaker has to the child... Mother? Father? Aunt? That's just a question I was wondering... This really is beautiful.
Wow! Nothing matters if a person loves a lady like this.It makes me remember, The Last Ride Together Of Robert Browning..Love is here pure, divine but unrequited.
Shouvik, I am speechless it is beautiful in the most Divine way. A recognized light that heals from another they may not know it themselves but tin this poem you have described how it may happen and its amazing! ! ! ! Bravo to you Shouvik you are feeling it. Love and light
This is so sweet and beautiful! Nice job :)