Monday, December 29, 2008

Without You By My Side. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sit and watch the clock tick,
another moment passed me by.
I miss you so; I feel so sick.
Without you here right by my side.
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Rikku Finry
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very nice poem i got the impression of lonliness here with the recurring theme 'by my side' so i guess you could call it without you by my side(just a suggestion) by the way did u mean this in third stanza lovely piece i give it 10 :)

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