Tuesday, October 4, 2011

'Without You' Comments

Rating: 4.1

The love songs I used to sing for you
now just seem like shattered words,
the white doves that followed us along the beaches
now seem like ordinary birds,
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Bernard Snyder
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Frankie Smith 23 January 2021

Sad true

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Keith Brown 25 April 2020

Love this great word pictures, havin great trouble typing this? Thanks for reading mine

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Sarah Shahzad 23 December 2019

Excellent..! ! & Nicely penned poem here..

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019

here on this earth o love everything goes on as usual by natural but I'm alone though in crowd can't scream out speak loud cause without you here I'm into me no truth!

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alan brown 10 September 2018

A very good heart rendering poem of losing someone close to you.well described.Enjoyed all of your poems Bernard.Alan

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Paul Reed 29 August 2017

Beautifult sentiments. lost love, things will never be the same. Great poem Bernard

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 August 2016

all say beautiful must be so

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2016

Beautiful flow of words painted with colors of pain. Seasons have changed yet memories of sweetness still remains. That's is what called life. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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La Donna Woods 24 June 2016

Sad, but beautiful. His love was so strong.

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Kewayne Wadley 02 April 2015

Nicely written! Beautiful show of emotion here. The up's and down's that accompany loves essence

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2015

A beautiful train of thoughts well encapsulated into a lovely poem. You employment of similes to drive home your convictions is quite appropriate and poetically remarkable. A lovely piece of poetry nicely written in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing and always remain blessed.

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Patricia Grantham 10 October 2014

Nothing is ever the same if true love is not there to lift it up. The beauty of your thoughts shines in this write. Lovely expressions.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 September 2014

Ups and down...happiness and sorrow and again happiness well expressed

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Tribhawan Kaul 08 September 2014

Feeling beautifully expressed in the lovely poem.

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David Harris 05 September 2014

A great poem. There is so much feeling there. A pleasure to read.

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2014

a beautiful worded love poem without you the nights are long

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 August 2014

beautiful love poem.nice flow and rhyme.liked it.

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Loaded with love, loss and loneliness. Well done my friend!

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Loaded with love, loss and loneliness. Well done my friend!

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Rekha Mandagere 01 August 2013

Lovely poem. I enjoyed the diction and the rhythm of the poem. The theme, ' How beautiful life can be if we are there for each other: -) is silently moving in the background of natural landscape'.

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