Friday, January 5, 2018

Without You, Comments

Rating: 5.0

without you,
without you iam no more,
I feel that I need you more,
your food is the more I get the more I want,
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Maxim Muyu
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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 30 November 2019

Well expressed. Full score.

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Chinedu Dike 13 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely penned from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Maxim.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2019

A very passionate appeal of love is reflected in this lovely poem....so well penned.....10/10

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 October 2019

this you yes this you are me and this me is a life of love!

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Joseph Karuri 17 January 2018

its just wow..................i love it

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Jazib Kamalvi 06 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Maxim. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 January 2018

Maxim, such a lovely poem...10++++

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Maxim Muyu

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