Wednesday, November 23, 2005

Without You Comments

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Without you,
there is no point in living.
Why should the sun keep shining,
The Birds singing,
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Alexandra Yeboah
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Didier Kahungu 25 July 2008

im really touched, may God thats says that He will not leave nor forsake be with you Alex

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Elizabeth Benedict 20 July 2007

Like Amanda said, you are not alone, Alex. And I noticed something, too: towards the end of the poem, the word 'you' was with a capital 'Y, ' to me, meaning 'God.' This is why you aren't alone :) He's with you! And He's with me, too! I hope this is what you had meant..

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Amanda Lukas 23 November 2005

You aren't alone. I'm sure the person that you are talking about is with you all that way, holding your hand and singing, dancing, and laughing with you. Beautiful poem, Alex.

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Alexandra Yeboah

Alexandra Yeboah

Toronto, Ontario
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