Without You Comments

Last lines are amazing, , , , .............10 I let all worries to evaporate in sky This light I must carry without you, till I die.

Though the lover's heart is broken, still we find positive hope in him which is a must needed thing in our life. very inspirational. thank you.

Let me revise it once again without you And realise what differences it’s going to do.....Fathomless thoughts twinkle here so brilliantly in your pen. Interesting and amusing poem. Thanks for sharing. ......10