Sunday, January 12, 2014

Without You Comments

Rating: 4.5

Take a look at me
my tears are falling, can't you see?
wouldn't you wipe it and let it dry
but if you'll stay i wouldn't cry
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Ana Rose Trazo
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 January 2018

My heart is breaking and it's bleeding couldn't resist the pain, can't stop my tears from falling 'cause when you left, i was left broken. please dont leave this heart........ a cry in pain, in the sense of rejection and leaving alone........ very well portrayed dear poetess. thank u always. tony

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Captain Herbert Poetry 25 April 2014

Very lovely and powerful message

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H Bello ida 12 January 2014

I really enjoyed your poem Ana Rose, it make me remembered my Gentle wife.

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