Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Without You Comments

Rating: 4.4

WITHOUT YOU

What is there in between you and me? ?
Some untold and unheard tales
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Morose Mermaid
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Adeeb Alfateh 26 June 2019

Light has left me alone Why has even the night left me? Now every morning seems like a cruel night to me Without you. loving wrote love 10+++++++++++++++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 May 2017

Light has left me alone Why has even the night left me? Now every morning seems like a cruel night to me Without you. love and its mysteries....... a beutiful poem on love........ experience it when you are young....... the youth has its special nature which u may not get later. thank you for this great poem on love. God bless u dear poetess

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Heather Wilkins 09 December 2013

a beautiful poem filled with a lot of sadness. Missing someone is very emotional

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Alok Singhal 01 December 2013

Touchingly expressed..a familiar feeling..

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Saadat Tahir 01 December 2013

A dense loneliness is spreading all around The destination lost its way strong emotive and a tad painful the quoted lines are v nice liked

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Khairul Ahsan 30 November 2013

'Now every morning seems like a cruel night to me Without you.' These two lines sum up the poem perfectly! Well done!

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Kanav Justa 27 November 2013

... you expressed your feelings wonderfully... could feel your pain when i was reading.... wonderful...

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