Without You Comments

With you by my side My nights also seem to be so bright, But, when you disappear Its as dark and dim as without even a beam of light without me, the reader?

a well constructed piece. it had warmth and love. loved it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)

Very sweet and touching poem..loved it: -) 10/10

short and sweet and seems you are deep in love.liked it.keep inking Trisha.