Tuesday, August 7, 2012

Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

A palace is but a shack
Limousine a jalopy
A tuxedo is but rags
Gold is devalued to mud
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Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
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A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. A life without God Almighty is meaningless. Living without faith could deliver us to nothingness. Beautifully crafted and well executed.

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Mysia Hayling 03 August 2016

lovely piece truly wonderful

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Nosheen Irfan 10 February 2016

The absence of a loved one can truly make us feel lost n disoriented. An expression of deep emotions through powerful imagery.

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Brian Stafford 07 June 2015

excellent poem, well written with feeling!

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Hazel Durham 25 May 2015

Brilliant write with beautiful imagery, I could really relate to this passionate write!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 15 April 2014

Absence of someone loved so much brings forth anguished feelings...........Simon......so simple yet powerful.......

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Unwritten Soul 04 November 2012

The phase contrast emerged when someone is not there to be cheers as togetherness..a nice poem, so different the way you do it_Soul

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Candymarie Nevin 04 November 2012

i really like this poem there is alot of meaning behind it.

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Walterrean Salley 01 November 2012

Could be spiritual or natural, seeing that one could lose in so many ways. I have lost loved ones, which left me feeling totally lost. Amazing how powerful the emotional connection. Well done.

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Antonio Liao 24 October 2012

the awkward of love comes in between stanza, sacrifice maybe but the essence of life lives in the most unexpected way. A Deep cooled breath of experienced recall...

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