A palace is but a shack
Limousine a jalopy
A tuxedo is but rags
Gold is devalued to mud
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The absence of a loved one can truly make us feel lost n disoriented. An expression of deep emotions through powerful imagery.
Brilliant write with beautiful imagery, I could really relate to this passionate write!
Absence of someone loved so much brings forth anguished feelings...........Simon......so simple yet powerful.......
The phase contrast emerged when someone is not there to be cheers as togetherness..a nice poem, so different the way you do it_Soul
i really like this poem there is alot of meaning behind it.
Could be spiritual or natural, seeing that one could lose in so many ways. I have lost loved ones, which left me feeling totally lost. Amazing how powerful the emotional connection. Well done.
the awkward of love comes in between stanza, sacrifice maybe but the essence of life lives in the most unexpected way. A Deep cooled breath of experienced recall...
A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. A life without God Almighty is meaningless. Living without faith could deliver us to nothingness. Beautifully crafted and well executed.