Sunday, August 23, 2009

Without You Comments

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I miss you
Your own selfish pride
Your hubris and narcissism
Is what made you go away
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 25 October 2009

Nice melancholy with touch of oozing love for fiancée Ten to cheer up your fiancée. LOL! dr.sakti. Please read and comment Only Love Amnesia series ds.

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Eyan Desir 10 October 2009

You will live ok Live and love good write

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Tharindu Atukorala 02 October 2009

I enjoy your writing, you speak from the heart, and your emotions are very well expressed...

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 August 2009

Will I ever know Why you went away Is it possible you could one day return to my embrace Because I will love you forever And I cannot bear the cost of the loss of you...... u have betrayed me totally.. what a feeling inthe poem..superb. it has touched me all the way...10 read mine miss i miss u..mary is going to marry...all dreams not come true

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