Without You Comments
Without you the waters lie still; the reflections of silent trees
Remain as though transfixed but not tranfigured.
Green shrubs and leaves remain sombre; clouds peer
And wonder at the stillness.
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This speaks so clearly to the reader's heart - - and identifying with the same experience I feel the same emptiness Rani - - - a very moving verse...10 plus from Fay..
this is a nice piece Rain, I tried something similiar 'Without You' Regards
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8/5/2025 10:24:42 AM # 1.0.0
'Without You'...But it's 'With You Always' as the heart says there...Feelings unexpressible nicely compared with rains hesitating to pour down...beautiful poem Rani...thanks...10