Friday, November 12, 2010

Without You Comments

Rating: 3.7

my soul screams your name,
my mind always thinks about you,
my life is useless without you,
without you im homless,
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Dipty Patel 13 March 2014

Thank you Jason for this wonderful poem, it seems you are truly in love with this person.. :)

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Husna Amin 12 March 2014

This is a call of a heart in need. The need to be someone's, the need to be loved in return...this is a call of love! Simple and honest, this poem speaks the agony too, that's somewhere hidden.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 12 March 2013

What a person I am to think the same way as this poem! Everyone of us in trance and we want someone to hold and to be held..Beautiful!

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Gajanan Mishra 12 March 2013

I will do anything just to have you here with me. good love. thanks.

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Besa Dede 30 April 2012

The message is so lovely, a beautiful ode to Love. ~Besa

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Neko Girl 18 March 2012

wow this is a truly great poem i love it you should write more u have such great potential :) love, tin mouse

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Jasbir Chatterjee 13 March 2012

it's a great poem, but I would like to add that single-minded passion is sometimes self-destructive; so beware, try to feel complete on your own; if you can't love yourself, how can you expect someone else to love you?

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Heyyou Boy 12 January 2012

A great write. well done

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 22 November 2011

That was plain amazing i dont know what this worlp would do with out such an amazing poetry writer.....i just its jsut outstanding and wonderfully great...keep it up u have a great talent

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Clare McCarthy 19 April 2011

I cant describe what Im thinking.. its that good.

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Amy Marie 03 January 2011

A very relatable poem

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Robin Serdynski 30 December 2010

its really nice hugz keep it up

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***lovergirl3000 *** 14 December 2010

this onne is my fave. i felt this way bout someone and even though were apart i still do. ur an excellent writer

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Fadwa Gmiden 22 November 2010

it's great poem. your love is great and big. keep it becoz that will makes u survive ;)

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