Saturday, May 17, 2008

Without The Rose Comments

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Love is like a rose
good to hold and smell
but then that rose begins to die
and you go through hell
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shelbie bozeman
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Barbara Terry 17 May 2008

The last stanza reminds me of my poem, 'My Heart Is Like The Red Rose.' Love is definitely like the thorns of the rose, prickly at best. I saw only one spelling error in the third line of third stanza. you have 'appererred' and it should be 'appeared'. Thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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