Monday, December 5, 2016

Without The Enemy Within Comments

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Purity to purity comprises a life,
But in between becomes a separate swagger,
Which grows and consumes to assume an illusion;
That self, which is pretentious image and brags and boasts
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Robert Merrett
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Chinedu Dike 19 January 2017

An insightful piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in heightened poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Robert.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 January 2017

A thought provoking poem, a nice write.

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Kim Barney 06 December 2016

A fascinating poem, Robert. This appears to be the first one that you have posted on this site, so Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Robert Merrett 15 December 2016

Thanks Kim, you are my first comment! and yes it is my first.... I spontaneously wrote and joined.

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