Sunday, June 17, 2018

Without Romance Comments

Rating: 4.5

If ever you leave me alone forever
I will say yes I can still live
Because I lived my life with you
And it was awesome
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Rini Shibu
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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2023

It will be a second chance a life without romance...your cute expression puts smile on my face!

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Captain Cur 20 June 2018

Alone without our love and the loss of romance, still life lies before us and we must soldier on, and as you so eloquently wrote, I will just follow the path. Beautiful poem!

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Akhtar Jawad 18 June 2018

One knows his lover will never leave her alone, but death lays its icy hands on the kings even. We often think like this in certain moments. The poetess has nicely described our emotions of a particular moment. A nice poem by Rini Shibu.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 June 2018

May I remind you RJ in a modern world today all know we all come to go away none has ever come to stay so when one goes away and you have a long way then get another one and say his or her memory in my mind lives we will start from where the chosen one left why leave a life so bereft it's a long way yet..My pages wait what you suggest

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 June 2018

Painful write Rini. Very true said in few lines, life will never be the same from that point of time.

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Robert Murray Smith 17 June 2018

The loss is what many experience. It can be read personally or universally.++10

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Sandra Feldman 17 June 2018

The unfortunate feeling of solitude and pain Comes thru, too well to be ignored. The poem's measure of sadness and loss is quite palpable and alive. So sorry

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Lamar Cole 17 June 2018

This is a very heartfelt and very emotional poem about without romance.

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